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"The Fire" by Telas Vane
« on: July 10, 2015, 09:32:16 PM »
I originally intended for this to be horrifyingly bad and dramatically depressing gothic poetry, you know, like that infamous awful fanfiction "My Immortal", but as a poem about something completely different. It ended up like this instead. Hope you like it!
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The Fire
by Telas Vane

Damn you all! Damn you all!
I'll get you for this!

You will hurt like I am hurting.
You will burn like I am burning.

My soul was torn and thrown into the fire.
But I came out to make you feel my ire.

Demons heed my beck and call!
With dark power, I'll destroy you all!

I'll strike you with my lash
Until your body's burned to ash

Then I'll tear your soul and throw you in the fire.

CURSE YOU, AMADSEER!
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Does it sound like something the warlock Telas Vane would write? What do you think?

Also, do you think this should be put to music? I feel like it would be fitting, but I also think it would be way creepier that way, and I'm not sure I'd be able to do it, or even want to. I'd probably get nightmares if I tried, lol.
« Last Edit: July 10, 2015, 09:44:29 PM by Sailor Vulcan »
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Re: "The Fire" by Telas Vane
« Reply #1 on: July 19, 2015, 10:15:47 PM »
Nice work -- I'm sure Telas Vane would be proud.  :D
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